A scream escapes
Deep from the soul
No path discernible
Fog fills the mind
Doubt creeps in
Alone in the night
Blind in the dark
A tear rolls down
Lost.
A carriage arrives
Hope knocks on the door
Hears a weak welcome
Enters the soul
Lightens the mind
Strengthens the faith
Shows the way forward
A tear rolls down
Found.
Beautiful! What great imagery…I could hear the carriage arrive! 🙂
Thank you! The arrival of the carriage was the most central thought I had for this poem and luckily I could work on one of my old pictures to illustrate it. Happy you liked it.
Great one my friend! Makes me feel there is hope. 🙂
Thanks Jackie – your feeling is spot on 🙂
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Thanks so much for the encouragement, I really appreciate it! I promise to follow the rules 🙂 …soon!
Great and beautifully stated.
Thank you!
Very beautiful – it is like you saw into the depths of my soul….when poetry can do that you know you have succeeded! Patty
Thank you Patty! Have a wonderful day.
Hope… Nice…
Thanks…I believe it’s never too far away…